Incarna
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In 2013, the Demon Gate, a portal that connects our world with the underworld was opened, all the creatures and the spirits of the dark–realm are now able to cross through the gate, spreading terror and death upon mankind, turning the world into a land of chaos, a hunting ground with all humans as their prey. Now, after 60 years since the gate opened, the world has turned back into the dark age, technologies, cultures, civilization, everything has been swept away. Among the survivors, there are some people with supernatural abilities; some stands for humanity and salvation, and others stand for their own ambition for power, ignoring everything including their own humanity. Between those leagues there is a man who stands alone against the darkness, Gabriel Raves, he has a demonic power in his left hand. The origin of that power is still unknown, even for Gabriel himself. For years he has been wandering alone in search of his forgotten past, until he met Yuki Ishimori, a female-ninja with high level of exorcism skill, in search of her father’s murderer. Their different goal has led them into the same path, the origin of the darkness itself.
Good to have competed with you David! Hope to see you here again soon.
my review here:
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http://pigs-of-the-industry.blogspot.com/2009/09/zuda-review-incarna-with-all-this-blood.html
@BillyBreaker & knytcrawlr : thank you for your comment and support guys.
really powerful stuff, I like your storyline, your colour work is epic!
I'd like to see how the comic pans out.
booobs!!! hahaha, you gotta love em' even if it's a drawing! love what you did here, and the dude on page 5, how many more muscles can one get!!! lol
i like this submission, good luck-
You have the art chops, no doubt. You should partner with a writer! There's lots around.
http://leftyfilms.net/dailybeatings/?p=229
Zuda September 2009 crossover comic.
@frequentcontributor & @famished: thanks for the comment and ideas.
@stevoip : thanks for your compliment, i'll try my best.
I really liked this. Beautiful art and cool action. My only complaint is that the father looks too young. Other than that I really think you did an awesome job. Keep up the fantastic work!
The art has some nice moments but there is nothing new or refreshing to this entry.
Ha! "His blow has rendered me unconscious." WTF? She doesn't SEEM very unconscious... Anyway, this comic has pretty art, some of the time, although it seems to rely on coloring for most of it, and some of that is a little overworked. The transition from dragon-slaying at the beginning to whatever was happening during the last 6 pages was confusing, and nothing really happened, story-wise, anyway. Nice fan-service at the end, there, but otherwise a boring and pointless comic. Should have had one page of the dad dying and one page of the girl getting her shiny new sword, and dedicated the rest to something actually HAPPENING.
@Chris Lawson & @zero-warrior : thanks for the comments, well, about the cliches, it's all i can do in very limited pages, i can't reveal everything in just 8 pages, and it was only a prologue.
@grobert79 & @Gnar Duce : thanks guys.
@dark yux : ^^
@Rider Two : hello number Two, it's nice to see you here, and where the hell is number Three ??? haha
I found it a bit cheesy and generic. How many times have we seen over and over in fiction, the hot babe who's kicking ass while still looking good doing it. Or the hero who swears revenge by using a weapon that (s)he used to only marvel at? Actually its okay to use those cliches, as long as your content is original enough to make your comic stand out, and I just dont get that feeling on this one.
The main character was very seductive - In a horrorish way... :) Good luck this month.
Gory! Sexy! Gotta love that! Really great undead.Good Luck!
I won't read it she's too necked.
Hello Rider One, I'm Rider Two. It's a nice character like you're. With the sh*t old style, but with a new F*cking skills! Wish you luck,like always.
Art was good, although sometimes revealing an amateur quality (eg. the shirtless white haired villain looks really wonky). Good setup for a revenge plot, but characters have cliched personalities that I've seen a million times. I could reaaaally go without the sexual fan service, especially at the end when she adorns her battle-thong.
@Tyler_James : hi, thanks for your comment and critics, actually i made that jumpy time and scene on purpose, kinda non-linear type of story telling, but i never thought it'll become difficult to read, my mistake then. And yes indeed, english is not my first language, and i'm a crappy writer.
@wei2k : got it man, thanks for you comment.
There's some nice art but I wish it wasn't quite so much hot girls and guy with abs. Makes it seem more like fan art. And the story is a bit too over dramatic; wish there was a bit more subtlety in the way it was told.
Beautiful art and coloring. I wish the storytelling was a little clearer. You jumped around time and place a bit too much, which made following the narrative difficult. Also, going the many small panel route without an establishing shot to set the scene can leave the reader lost. You can only do this so much before you risk losing audience. Also, working with an English as first language editor would have helped (I'm assuming English is not your first language.) Some of the dialogue is a little too on the nose and unnecessary.
Still, strong entry and wish you the best of luck. Hope to see more from you.
@EliNavarro : Hi, thanks for your compliment, and it's true, it's a very tough competition.
@ Michael :100% sex appeal ? Really? You love blood and gore do you ? hahaha JK
@nandop : Thanks man, nice to hear that from a fellow competitor.
That's some killer art you got there man. Congrats!
100% sex appeal. 50% story.
Hi. I think your work is great. Creativity in the panels and color are breathtaking. Very hard this competition for vote. Good luck
@ferri0, @kenshanghai : thanks a lot guys.
@BlueMaxx : thanks for your comments, but i assure you, it's nothing like onimusha ^^
@kingofsnake : thanks for your critics, as you can see, my english is not very good T_T, so i need to fix that, and do it better next time.
@ StrokerX : thanks for your compliment, it's nice to hear that from a great artist like you, and, yes, i love soul calibur^^.
It's Great!!!!!!
Thanks^^
You got some beautiful art here with some hot booties....reminds me of Soul Caliber...and any mention of Susanoo is ok it my book.
Rider,
That was an awesome response. Thanks.
The art is nice, if not excessively boobalicious. The story was told a little sloppily. The narration switches from a storyteller to the expositional thoughts of the main character on the second page. Considering the setting, the former fit excellently, and the latter did not. I doubt the character would've known a word like "Zombie" which has African roots, she would probably use a different expletive than "son of a-" They undermine the authenticity of the story, it doesn't feel genuine, like a legend, but it feels like that's what you were trying for.
It's funny, I just finished watching part of a 2012 documentary.
This felt like Onimusha, but it just didn't capture my interest. No offense, it is just that it was the vague beginning of a supernatural, revenge plot.
Awesome !!
Nice drawing and story ...
thank you all for your comment and support,
@James Clayton & Bryy_Miller : thanks for your critics, i'll keep that in mind and do it better next time.
good job bro.. gudluck for u
Is that standard temple-wear? LOL
Reviewed:
http://leftyfilmsblog.blogspot.com/2009/09/zudaseptember-2009.html
quasilucid, James Clayton, mpd57, Dracodyne, red_skull - thanks for the comments guys.
that was just awesome!
nice..... dave...
Manga meets zombies meets sexy heroine. Meh.
Enormous knockers! No Knickers! Most reprehensible! Now where do I vote for this?
Samurai sword and mystical zombie action has me intrigued. Sadly, I'm not a fan of the ultra-digitalised style and the dialgue errors bring it down. I'm also put off by that once again a female hero is offered up as a sex object (which I'm really sick of seeing in comics overand over). There' a promising story and nice action here though, it's just as shame that those things kill it for me personally.
nice action. best of luck!